feedback on ad 1

After discussing ad one with Mr Michie and the amendments that need to be made (lighting, using a photo for character), we have now planned to make these changes at laura's house Thursday next week after school. This will enable us to put music and narration to ad 1 ,as well as making a few changes to make it more effective. So hopefully by the end of next week we can move on to the production of ad 2- finally!